Presented my brochure as we had peer review by writing on sheet next to brochure in how well its elements communicated in different context. I received mixed review with criticism mainly being that it didn’t feel very clear that it was communicate the theatre and needed more strengthening to the use of text. Tulia also believed the use of logo use in upcoming events needed to be more clearly communicated that was the logo of venue. The cover needs more design elements communicating to visual style on the inside.
Meeting with caroline i had played on visual elements of bats putting in the silhouette of a lion king show, and the addition of lights from bats location to strengthen design. Caroline liked this design and believed that i should change the elements being made to keep gryphons design and redo circa and gryphons in bats current style. She also advised change in text size, scaling down keys, having subheadings.
222.257 Visual Communication Design 